My Favourite Hello And Hardest Goodbye Poem by Silence Dogood

My Favourite Hello And Hardest Goodbye

Rating: 4.5


In the halls you pass me by.
Without a hello without a goodbye.
No second glance my way.
Forgotten like yesterday.
You took my heart ripped it in half.
You took my smiles my childhood laughs.
No more smiles on my face.
No more chances in this race.
Im never going to be that girl.
Who smiles in her perfect world.
When will you see that I love you?
Your smile laugh and crazy hairdos.
When you turn around I wont be there.
Took you too long to see that I care.
In the halls I pass you by.
My favourite hello and hardest goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 07 September 2008

Good rhythm and I think you have woven this one together well. I like the use of the repeat at the end. Follows through well. Good thinking. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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