My Fault Poem by smol mad rad cat

My Fault



I look around me at my people
They are smiling, smiling
Clock ticks on, pendulum swings
Mistake

I look around me at my people
They are frowning, frowning
Clock ticks on, pendulum swings
Grave error

I look around me at my people
They are crying, crying
Clock is broken, pendulum stops
Disaster

I look around me at my people
They are silent, silent
Clock is burning, pendulum ash
My fault


(9/28/2012)

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mistake
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Pure fantasy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 16 September 2016

Great poem with profound metaphors and fortified emotions, with spirit.

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