My Father's Son Poem by Barry Middleton

My Father's Son

Rating: 5.0


my father sat beside me
as we headed down the river
he was not strong
but he was still a man

oh he could fell the timber
and he could plow a furrow
but many things
he could not understand

he could not say I love you
but he knew the darkest forest
and he knew the lonely place
I had to go

and he could not travel with me
far beyond the river valley
nor teach me all the things
I had to know

yes he was like the mountain
that I had to face alone
like many things
I'll never understand

but I told him that I loved him
and his eyes filled with tears
as he looked up
at a strong but lonely man

My Father's Son
Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: father and son,loneliness,love,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 06 February 2016

I could not imagine fathers of the okder generation were the same in different countries.They stood at home as monuments, like tall trees, rocks, you could find support.So nicely said.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 February 2016

The bonding between father and son and different aspects of the relationship including emotional transactions have been narrated in an amazing manner. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Barry Middleton 06 February 2016

Thank you for the kind comment and rating.

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