My Fantasy Poem by tina mcintosh

My Fantasy

Rating: 5.0


i have this little fantasy
and its comeing from my heart
and im wondering if
you'll like to take part
i have this feeling
thats growing deep inside
its a funny little feeling
and im not sure where to start
so if you can help me out
im sure that you'll agree
that this funny little feeling
is starting with you and me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 15 November 2007

Hi Tina! Short and sweet and beautiful to read! ! ! ! *10 *! ! ! ! Thad

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Marvin Brato 15 November 2007

Well, if what i thought is right, it the universal thing that blossoms in the heart could love? Nice poem, a cutie with passion. Worth a 10.

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tina mcintosh

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salford / manchester
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