My Eyes Don'T Like The Sun Poem by Francesca Johnson

My Eyes Don'T Like The Sun

Rating: 4.4


My eyes don't like the sun

which is a pity
because it's pretty
when it shines.

I can't convince my eyes at all!
They seek the shade.

My body,
on the other hand,
does like the sun,
the warmth on my skin
and the good feeling within
generated by its rays.

So I'm in a dilemma.

Sun? Shade? Shade? Sun?

I can't please everyone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 10 January 2008

Dear Fran This aches to read, I too can sympathise, what a stunning piece to read, Love duncan X

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Well now. My eyes do like your poetry. I can't assist you in this dilemma however. :) t x

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Zoe Howarth 28 August 2008

this poem made ma laugh xD i loved it. nice work xD zoe. xx

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Bob Blackwell 27 April 2008

Fran I'll take the warm sun anyday and wear transition lens which go dark and light in tune. I love to feel the warm sun on my back, it makes me feel alive. I like this one. Bob

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John Tiong Chunghoo 29 March 2008

that is why we need to prioritise. the eyes are made for them. so listen to your eyes. good one francesca.

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Meggie Gultiano 13 January 2008

ha ha..you have placed me in a dilemma too.. Nice write..enjoyed it

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okeydokey #3 12 January 2008

well...that is a good one...it is so interesting how you...write about the most...everyday things...and yet...your poetry shines...this is good...and ernestine northover must be tripping...whoo...

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