'My Everything' Poem by dan wittenkeller

'My Everything'

Rating: 3.1


I’m sitting here and laying down
I’m waiting here for that special girl to call
The voices in my head all day
Yet they never fade away
Beautiful eyes, skin, and hair

And none of it is close to fair
But amazing is what it is
When I’m with her I’m happy
When I dream about her I’m in heaven up high
It’s just like I’m the little boy flying his kite
Looking up in the sky for what I can find
When I look up I find you
Your all around me I can’t escape
Because if I leave my love for other girls would be fake
I will never be alone again
Because if she leaves I will beg
When I’m with her she is the sky, earth, sun, and clouds
She doesn’t even have to make any sounds
If I’m just looking in her eyes I will be ok
Because there is many words I can always say
They all come out in the bloom
Especially these three…
I love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 July 2009

It's a kinda 'puppy love'.You do have a talent Dan.Keep on writing bro! ! !

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Just start by a small thing and see, how much you can change the world! ..... it is so beautifully woven with words... i loved and like it..... beautiful theme.... read mine, , , , mary tomarry, ....dreams all not come true....miss i miss you and go to hell

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your everything is written to the fullest... nice poem, well expressed, in love silence speaks more than words.. read my poems when you find time, thank you..

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Callie Valentine 05 July 2009

Oh my goodness, this is definitely the sweetest poem I've ever read. :)

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