My Empty Nest** Poem by Milica Franchi De Luri

My Empty Nest**

Rating: 5.0


Why does sadness surrounds me?

Why are my eyes wet with tears?

Why is joy absent from my heart?

Why emptiness abides

where there once was abundance?

With each departure part of me departed

part i can not retrieve
.
Gone forever in a basket

were memories are gathered

collecting dust and cobwebs.

Revisited only by ponderings.

When the heart is yearning;

to touch, to hold, to see, to hear;

the cry, the laughter,

the yelling, the pleading, the silence.
Every you were you were redy to live
to go with your new found love,
to mouve to your new place,
to go away


i was happy for you

just my heart was bleeding

knowing it had to let you go

to travel your own journey

For i had my time

and i did my best

Now, i know you must do the rest.

Your calling was stronger

then my holding.

And i don't want to cling

i want you to have the best of everything.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 10 September 2009

Avery emotional poem, milica! Cheer up dear, emptiness is the beginning of Godliness! !

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Raj Arumugam 11 September 2009

Ah, Milica - my daughter went to Melbourne a few years ago and that was how I felt...the poem captures that feeling so well... I wonder if this is your situation too or if you are just singing, as a poet, for all of us...

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 September 2009

an emotional poet as you are, anyone can enjoy your wordings.10 shan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

Now, i know you must do the rest. Your calling was stronger then my holding. And i don't want to cling i want you to have the best of everything..why we can't have when it is inabundance....we must deliver thebest anddo everything for it..... i loved the poem to its end.....beautiful....10 read mine yes to to....what if tomorrow

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Philip Winchester 21 October 2009

A Family can Blossom by opening the cage door Letting the Darlings Fly, Making their Own Way in Life.To Prove to you that You 'Did Get It Right' When thought 'What Shall We Do For The Best' Well Did You? Now at Last! Your Time as a Great Poet Has Arrived. Welcome Aboard Honey...We Said You Always 'Had It In You' Now you have time to Prove It...And You Do....Time and Time Again. +10 Kind Regards Philip.....Midnight -2am....Time to Myself....Golden.

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Alaude Solus 01 January 2011

Truly inspiring poem for mothers and/or fathers. Thank you. I'm sure you're a great mom.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 June 2010

Touchy and moving poetry….a jilt…well jolt is difficult…life will move on the wings of sad and happy memories…here you’ve portrayed flip side of life…an element fab favorite of poets…heart breakingly [and brakingly] becomes a poetic savory…… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Philip Winchester 21 October 2009

A Family can Blossom by opening the cage door Letting the Darlings Fly, Making their Own Way in Life.To Prove to you that You 'Did Get It Right' When thought 'What Shall We Do For The Best' Well Did You? Now at Last! Your Time as a Great Poet Has Arrived. Welcome Aboard Honey...We Said You Always 'Had It In You' Now you have time to Prove It...And You Do....Time and Time Again. +10 Kind Regards Philip.....Midnight -2am....Time to Myself....Golden.

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Philip Winchester 21 October 2009

A Family can Blossom by opening the cage door Letting the Darlings Fly, Making their Own Way in Life.To Prove to you that You 'Did Get It Right' When thought 'What Shall We Do For The Best' Well Did You? Now at Last! Your Time as a Great Poet Has Arrived. Welcome Aboard Honey...We Said You Always 'Had It In You' Now you have time to Prove It...And You Do....Time and Time Again. +10 Kind Regards Philip.....Midnight -2am....Time to Myself....Golden.

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Philip Winchester 21 October 2009

A Family can Blossom by opening the cage door Letting the Darlings Fly, Making their Own Way in Life.To Prove to you that You 'Did Get It Right' When thought 'What Shall We Do For The Best' Well Did You? Now at Last! Your Time as a Great Poet Has Arrived. Welcome Aboard Honey...We Said You Always 'Had It In You' Now you have time to Prove It...And You Do....Time and Time Again. +10 Kind Regards Philip.....Midnight -2am....Time to Myself....Golden.

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