My Empty Life 2 Poem by Anne jojo

My Empty Life 2

Rating: 5.0


Life is the main cause of death,
They say that,
True may be,
But i think it's fiction,
Who knows the end,
Where it lies?
At the other side of the bank,
There's light i see,
If i cross this river,
How much longer is the,
Journey going to be?
Now i like to discover,
Not what i fear most,
Which is what i don't know,
But where the treasure lies,
If i cross this river.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lesa K 01 September 2006

This is a lovely message of hope. You chose the words well.

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Crystal Chown 01 September 2006

that is really good. its better than my. but I really like it. I glad you liked my poems thank you

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