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Aditi Khandelwal

Rookie - 1 Points (December 27 1997)

My Dream Land


My dream world where I love to stay
Is near the ocean, the sea and the bay.
With the mild scented breeze I sway
And colorful flowers blow my mind away.

There buildings are shorter than palm trees
I can find nature's friend- the bees.
No continuous honking of the cars,
Peacefully alone, with me are my stars.

When all other seasons sleep in mother nature's lap,
Monsoon comes to fill the gap.
Then green and waterfalls fill my dream land
Like a beautiful magic from a wizard's wand.

But every time when I look at the reality,
My dream world fades away
Then everywhere I see are human made calamities.
Now I only see tall buildings on my way.

Then I see a dream world more pleasant,
Beautiful than yesterday, lovelier than present.
My twinkling star better than new,
My dream land in reality I see in you.

Submitted: Saturday, May 26, 2012

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This poem is mostly about my recent trip to a heavenly place called Goa. That place was really like a dream to me it has everything from beaches to palm trees and a pollution free atmosphere...

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  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (7/24/2012 11:16:00 PM)

    Beautiful and Touching! This is a very smooth and inspiring write which is also well crafted and rich in imagery! Clearly, your poetic talent is filtered through this write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,476 Points Ramesh Rai (5/26/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    My dream land in reality I see in you. Aditi! nice composition , superb n cool. fantastic and great write. keep it up. you must read my some newly posted poems. top marks. and best wishes (Report) Reply

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