It's indeed a wonderful poem longing for peace in this chaotic world of ours! Gillian, your good thought, beautiful presentation of the poem in rhyme and rhythm captures the heart ! NO WONDER your poem has been selected as Member poem of the day! CONGRATS! kEEP IT UP!
beautiful indeed. i liked how it took a turn in the last part, though the rythm was a little off. regardless, there are so many great poems. many of which are written, but few are read. im glad i was able to catch this one. nice.