My Destiny Song Poem by Sameer Ahmed

My Destiny Song

Rating: 4.8


O' melody queen
Keep on whirring
And denting
Signature of a new day with your beak
On murky glass of my window.

O' melody queen
Remain my alarm clock forever
And wake me up every morning
With your mellifluous tunes.

O' melody queen
Be my fortuneteller for lifetime
And bring me luck each day
With your lyrical expressions.




(1/18/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2009

The tittle should have better been, 'O' Melody Queen'; all the same, thank you for sharing it with us. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Sandra Fowler 21 January 2009

Pure enchantment, Sameer. Your metaphors are very original. I like what you see from your window on the world.10 for you. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Anthony Foster 21 January 2009

Very well put together, filled with the hope andanticipation of the challenges of a new day 10

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poetry has been transcripted n translated from your genes and is being expressed in your heart

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Jagannath rao Adukuri 25 January 2009

nice one, Sameer: thanks

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Another amazing poem..10!

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Another amazing poem..10!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 May 2009

'O' melody queen Be my fortuneteller for lifetime And bring me luck each day With your lyrical expressions.' It is also a melodious poem. I love the above lines most,10+++

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 April 2009

'o' melody queen - love this- we need her to wake up too and to walk at our side, you have a natural talent...well done

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Muhammad Ali 31 January 2009

i am confusing whether to praise or not............ it is so beautiful that i have no words ++++++++++10

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