My Desire Poem by Evy Moore
My Desire
Hair so dark like the nightly sky
I will not sit and watch your love pass me by
Skin so smooth like a silk woven dress
Judgeing by the things that i am feeling, you must be an enchantress
Heart so warm like a cold day's fire
Of all the fine things it is you that i desire
Kisses so sweet like a afternoon treat
My feelings for you are love and love cannot be beat
Your peronlity is so diffrent, so pure, so shy
Just let me tell you that i love you but you need not ask why
Voice so soft like a warm summer breeze
When i'm found in your sight I uncontrolably freeze
Beholding your beauty is like beholding a rare treasure
The feelings that we share i hope they'll last forever
every line creates a beautiful picture before the reader.superb thought loaded with emotions.
My feelings for you; with the muse of love and life. Nice work.
They all sound good like this one Evy nice work good job dave xxx
This poem has some lovely images in it and your emotions come across sincerely. It's great to someone so young dipping into his heart to share his feelings with the world. Keep writing Evy. Love, Alison
Evy, thank you for your note and so, I want to say that your poetry is full of intelligence and very good rhyme. Don't give up for lack of comments; people will discover you in time. Meanwhile, remember the old adage: to make a friend, you've got to be a friend.......... This poem is sweet and lovely in all the ways that count. Esther : ]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 10:53:43 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Very sweet and loving poem Evy, we need more of your muse in the world. Love the title, I think it actually applies to us all. Smiling at you, Tai