My Delight Poem by Heather Burns

My Delight

Rating: 4.7


There you lay
at the bottom
of the lake.

So beautiful
alone
waiting
unclaimed.

I,
in wonderment
of this
lovely red
rose.

So alluring
passionate,
precious.

To claim her
would be my
delight.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
inspired by the rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 11 July 2013

I love the rose; it's among my favorite flowers. A lovely write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 July 2013

A lovely poem on the red rose is a great delight to read! Beautiful and precise!

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Neela Nath Das 11 July 2013

A rose is a symbol of beauty.You expressed your heart-felt delight after seeing the unclaimed rose and the description also stirs our minds.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 July 2013

Lovely red rose at the bottom of the lake. Beautiful image. Thank you.

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R.j. Wynn 10 July 2013

That sounds cool and so deep and wet!

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