My Death Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

My Death



You were my happiness,
but now my misery.
My truth, but now- lies;
my only dream
that turned into a nightmare;
my smile but now my tears;
my joy but now my agony;
my blessing but now my curse;
my source of love,
but now- hatred;
My only need,
but now- unwanted.
You were my life...
but now my death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Skye Masen 04 February 2008

I agree w/ Ivan Donn Carswell. You're writing is really unique. I love your writing and so do a whole lot of my friends [Not on Poemhunter but my friends were over at my house and I showed them ur poems. They luved em too! ! ! ! ] luvs! Skye<3 xx Keep up the good work!

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Ivan Donn Carswell 23 January 2008

Jane, I have just read thru all your poems. You have a developing talent which I will watch with keen interest. I hope you continue to write - your style is both unique and very good! Rgds, Ivan

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Subbaraman N V 17 January 2008

There is no need to feel so miserable! Let us face the life boldly and learn to reconcile to the realities of life which provides greater peace!

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