My Dearest Foe! ! ! Poem by Shahzia Batool

My Dearest Foe! ! !

Rating: 2.8


Sometimes
that is
really pleasant
to wander
in the barren deserts
of feelings
and imagination,
but not of course
with everyone;
My dearest foe!
it's only you
for whom i bother
to bear the sufferings
of such a journey...
that's very nice
at every moment
to think of you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 30 September 2012

of feelings and imagination, you rightly said they are your not two but a common a foe i love the poem!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 08 October 2012

actually foes should be the driving force for excellence, but most of the time we are very afraid to face them. the intelligent verses from a friend!

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 October 2012

in the barren deserts of feelings and imagination......Very wisely said. Enjoyed your writing. Tfs

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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2013

send blessings to each and all good write

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Sun Shine 26 November 2012

My Different Dearest Foe! ! !

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Anita Sehgal 25 November 2012

what a touching and nice deep thought..

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Saeed Jan 12 November 2012

superb write that offers different interpretations... Foe as I think is not the one as some of my fellows took it for... It can be a lover... The poet refers to a dearest foe, that vexes u all the time and gives u hard time of thinking and bothering about.... The pain given by love or lover also has its own relish... May be I'm wrong but that's what I think of this great piece.... Excellent write

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 29 October 2012

Yes, we can just bless everybody in our life, because they are our teachers.

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