My Confusion Poem by Lily Bud

My Confusion

Rating: 4.5


The wind silently slide pass me,
Blowing my hair in the crispy morning ray light.
Standing at a cornor,
looking up to the sky.

What is this that I am feeling?
It is so warm, comfortable,
yet so breakable.
Mood swings occur lots of time.

Friend or foe?
Love or hate?
Coincidence or fate?
True or false?

I want to tell you everything,
everything I know.
In exchange, you must tell me.
Tell me the answers to my questions.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nicklas Leow 15 February 2016

There will always be a time where everyone will be confuse. Be brave, take a step forward and seek for the answer. Even if the answer is not what you want to hear, at least you know you can start moving to the next phase of your journey. Dwelling in the past will only bring you more unhappiness. Sorry I read all your poems and just wanted to comment here.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 December 2012

good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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