My Child Poem by louis rams

My Child

Rating: 5.0


the LORD blessed me with a child this day.
much more beautiful than words can say.

came into this world with such energy
bouncing around and being free.

captured the hearts of all around
bringing happiness in leaps and bounds.
another like her can't be found.

she is the inspiration in my soul
just to think of her and the words start to flow.

she has a beauty beyond compare
of which all men would love to share.

for in her heart all can see
that she is like a bird
who must be set free.

free to show the world that
she is in charge of her life
and can also be a mother and wife.

she is the one who showed me
how to show my feelings and thoughts
to the world. she is my little girl.

she is my child and i am proud to say
i love her more each and every day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 06 February 2009

What a charming tribute to your little girl. Warm sentiments, more than deserving of a ten. kind regards, Sandra

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Heather S 03 April 2009

this is a wonderful poem and my family and i think that it resembles me in many ways any girl would love this poem and any daughter(if you have any) of yours must be wonderful just like you and is lucky to have someone in their life like you! (thanks for dedicating this poem to me) Love Heather Stephens)

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Linda Winchell 07 February 2009

Our Children are truly gifts from God. We learn from them as we raise them. Ten on this one Sir Louis! God Bless, Linda

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 February 2009

very beautiful poem.....I loved it.

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this is a beautiful tribute. love how you project your desire for her future. which like you, is full of virtue and going with God's will. I vote 10

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Thank you so much for this write this is wonderful I love it.. Thank you so much again Krista

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