My Busy Bee Poem by Anusha fernando

My Busy Bee



Warm breezy day
Gazing standing opposite
At St.peter's school
Morning 8.30am

Too see the flock
Carry heavy bags
That droop them down
Or make the tumble

Being a tough day
For the traffic corp
To control the vehicles
threatening with his stick


The automobile drivers
Steering the wheel
Finding a way
to escape the crowd

Buetterflies swarming
Into the campus
Just walked from sleep
Worried of their exams

Is this the place
I heard of?
Where they train
On behaviour

I may not be lucky
Don't have someone
To pat me on my back
And bid bye to school

But surely
Would not let
This situation of mine
Happen to my child

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 18 January 2009

nicely drafted poem Being a tough day For the traffic corp To control the vehicles threatening with his stick The automobile drivers Steering the wheel Finding a way to escape the crowd

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Solomon Brook 09 February 2006

There are some gems in this poem. Well done. English grammer is challenging when it isn't native. But your effort is respected, and noted. Keep up the good work.

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