My Brother Julian. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

My Brother Julian.

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my brother julian is weird,
but hes not one to be feared,
burgers and fries is all he eats,
loves video games
but he always cheats,
sleeps all night sleeps all day,
he goes to church but i never heard him pray,
but his nose is special it could smell food a mile away,
he gets crazy and physco thats why i call him violent j,
he loves food like they aint no tommorow,
he eats so fast i sometimes wonder if he swallowed,
hes always first in line to order,
hes favorite food is the ultimate cheeseburger,
hes cool but mostly rude,
but show him your food and violent j will druel.

1/05/2008
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reihaneh Jalalian 08 January 2009

wonderful. hey its not really weird

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Genesis Learny 11 January 2009

just hilarious! julian reminds me of so many people! lol

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sumaira .....ir 19 January 2009

Hey! Your bro will kill u for this hehehe :) nicely writin, funny poem: -)

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Jessica Waskelis 13 February 2009

o wow i would love to cook for him man people like him i lov to cook 4 man 4 real its funnie

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Cynthia Ulloa 02 January 2010

ahahaha! ! que chistoso! ! sounds like me haha, . thats kinda like my x bf too and ironically tambien se llama julian! xD

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Lady Grace 13 October 2009

my gosh..so you want to spread and let others know bout the eating habit of ur bro my dear...well, it is represented in a nice way....

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Whitney t 17 August 2009

lol wow that poem was so funni hey I have a bro just like that, but he older but great poem and that was very funni! ! ! ! and bro your bro is crazzzzi to eat like that (just kiddin) bravo

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Mari Velazco 12 August 2009

lol wow that kinda reminds me of me lol i love food 2 nd i can get a little rough sometimes lol love it

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Reecey Renee 19 February 2009

I love it when poems rhyme.. funny as well.

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