My Breath Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

My Breath

Rating: 5.0


On my loneliness
I swear
I can’t live
Without you
My breath

Of my sunflower
Glare,
Blinds
Ends
My death

2009/10/12

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

I can’t live Rachel Ann Butler

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Rachel Butler 27 October 2009

I can’t live Without you My breath Rachel Ann Butler

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Emma Adamyan 18 October 2009

mmmmmmmmmmmm sweet! full of faithfulness and true devotion

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M M 15 October 2009

Quintessence of love is hold in so few words here. You manage, once again, to give a dramatic intensity to your feelings with very well chosen simple words. 10!

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Tsira Goge 14 October 2009

Amazingly high grief and love of the Nightingale...10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 13 October 2009

It would be impossible to read these poignant lines and remain unmoved. It is possible to be living, and still not be alive. Beautiful, but sad, my friend.10, for you. Warm wishes, Sandra

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