cynthia carpenter

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My Beautiful One Poem by cynthia carpenter


My beautiful princess you rescued me
You captured the darkness and set me free
I never knew loving you would be so great
Falling for you has become my fate
Let us go to this new world of ours
To lay together underneath the stars
To love one another forever
As long as our hearts are together
My lovely one you stole my heart
I’ve loved you from the beginning from the start

Submitted: Tuesday, January 14, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, January 15, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 8,506 Points Daniel Brick (9/4/2014 7:46:00 AM)

    As a series of statements these ten lines add up to a convincing expression of a love affair already moving ahead with considerable speed. And there's movement in the nature of the love implied in two lines I like FALLING FOR YOU HAS BECOME MY FATE / LET'S GO TO THIS NEW WORLD OF OURS. This is a threshold moment, and crossing it together will be mutually enriching. Wonders await both of you! . (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,034 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/7/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    Nice thoughts of love, and nice rhyme too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,246 Points John Westlake (5/19/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    Very beautiful. I loved this one. May you be happy together (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Nixon (2/4/2014 1:29:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, heartfelt and emotional.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 189 Points Gary H (1/18/2014 1:49:00 AM)

    This is so good, loving as the other people had already said. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,796 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/16/2014 11:13:00 AM)

    very nice love feelings...............short and sweet................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bhavna Singh (1/16/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    very beautiful poetry (Report) Reply

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