Treasure Island

cynthia carpenter

(jacksonville, flordia)

My Beautiful One


My beautiful princess you rescued me
You captured the darkness and set me free
I never knew loving you would be so great
Falling for you has become my fate
Let us go to this new world of ours
To lay together underneath the stars
To love one another forever
As long as our hearts are together
My lovely one you stole my heart
I’ve loved you from the beginning from the start

Submitted: Tuesday, January 14, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (My Beautiful One by cynthia carpenter )

Enter the verification code :

  • Daniel Brick (9/4/2014 7:46:00 AM)

    As a series of statements these ten lines add up to a convincing expression of a love affair already moving ahead with considerable speed. And there's movement in the nature of the love implied in two lines I like FALLING FOR YOU HAS BECOME MY FATE / LET'S GO TO THIS NEW WORLD OF OURS. This is a threshold moment, and crossing it together will be mutually enriching. Wonders await both of you! . (Report) Reply

  • Gary H (1/18/2014 1:49:00 AM)

    This is so good, loving as the other people had already said. (Report) Reply

Read all 7 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. I almost was left behind., Sonia Ode Lucci
  2. Fairyland, Alesia Leach
  3. Lack of money does not mean lack of wisdom, MOHAMMAD SKATI
  4. On The T.V., Hannah Bryson Price
  5. Why do need wisdom anytime?, MOHAMMAD SKATI
  6. it is almost poetry, Mandolyn ...
  7. Wisdom's great aim, MOHAMMAD SKATI
  8. Our world is without any kind of wisdom, MOHAMMAD SKATI
  9. Dream packed drama, hasmukh amathalal
  10. A fool واحد احمق, MOHAMMAD SKATI

Poem of the Day

poet Walt Whitman

ARM’D year! year of the struggle!
No dainty rhymes or sentimental love verses for you, terrible year!
Not you as some pale poetling, seated at a desk, lisping cadenzas
piano;
...... Read complete »

   

Trending Poems

  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  5. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, Dylan Thomas
  7. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  8. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  9. If, Rudyard Kipling
  10. Nothing Gold Can Stay, Robert Frost

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]