My Ambitious Is Dead Poem by Asif Baloch

My Ambitious Is Dead

Rating: 5.0


Exhaling life
Inhaling death
Dream of lies
Love is fake
Smirked face
Unknown race
Desperately waiting
To fed on rest
Falling, climbing
Feelings thus hate
Trying but not getting
Is my fate
Wanting to see
With blind folded eyes
Listening to song
With deafened ears
Feelings thou felt
Has long since gone
Trying to rise but
My ambitious is dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

Well don Asif. Deeply woven sentiment/feeling; well expressed......10

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Egi David Perdana 26 October 2008

a wonderful line and prasa, good idea 10

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2008

good expressive write...excellent clarity on the selected theme...10

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