*my All... * Poem by Dislocated Heart

*my All... *

Rating: 2.7


Your shinin like a star,
So bright that when we're apart,
It still seems like,
The distances is barely there..

Our hearts,
that connects us all,
We'll never be apart..

I'll love from the very start.
Nothin, will change that.
Nothin, will change that.

One thing for you to keep
Is this very key,
That opens up my heart.. just for you to see,
the love I have to give, and my Heart to love you with.

All the love I have,
All I've got to give,
I wanna give it all to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mayra Cerda 09 February 2010

i like the way you open up your heart like that on a poem nice :)

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Meagan Slack 06 May 2009

Wow its so refreshing to hear a guy speak like that.. i really love how you are very open and vulnerable.. keep writing

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Kerli Undead 10 February 2009

wow... your peoms have such wonderfull feelings that give off, i love them ~kerli

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Stacey Watts 29 November 2008

Really a heart felt piece. Great job.

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 27 November 2008

On a scale of 1-10.....15

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