My Addiction Poem by Lora Colon

My Addiction

Rating: 4.7


I'm numb to the pain of loneliness,
Unable to feel its sting,
I can't respond to the emptiness,
Or the despair it used to bring

I can't remember the burning tears
I cried in my solitude,
Nor the long nights that were filled with fears
When terrifying thoughts would intrude

I found remnants of a chain I wore
That shackled me to a stone,
A dark abyss was mine to explore,
Where I always found myself alone

I vaguely recall the sleepless nights
Consoling my weary heart,
Forcing my spirit to soar to heights
Where I could smile, and healing would start

No longer is my fate predicted
In the sad song of the dove,
I'm drugged..... and hopelessly addicted
To the opiate that is your love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Lessard 08 June 2014

An opiate called love is a potent substance! Good write.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 May 2015

Lovely piece with a descriptive ending.Enjoy.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 June 2014

A lovely poem, written with the heart. I enjoyed reading it.

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Lila Holmes 11 June 2014

I love how all of your poems have relatable messages that everybody has related to some point in their life, very well written Lora.

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Brian Johnston 09 June 2014

Could opiate be too strong a word? It brings up for me fears that I might be blind to the truth and not simply that I am estatic, joyful, or exhilarated. But in any case, and always, I am happy that you are happy.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 June 2014

love on hopeless addict, there's no better drug for life.

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Lora Colon

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Missouri - United States
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