My 20/20 Vision Poem by Malou Ocfemia

My 20/20 Vision

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I am here on top of a cliff
Seeing the world as I am in the lift
With my pierce eyes seeing the rift
Of the earth below which is a gift.

The rift on earth that I can see,
With my 20-20 vision I see clearly
A place to live comfortably
But there is a rift how can that be?

I ask God, why there is a rift
That my 20-20 vision can always see
The earth that is a perfect gift
Where I worship Him on bended knee

As I was thinking now and before
My 20-20 Vision had seemed gone wrong
As I see the earth’s imperfect side
Should I always view it on the positive side?

A glass that is half empty or half full,
Or roses with thorns or thorns with roses
To view the earth as beautiful
its up to me what I really chooses

.Will I always see the whiteness of the paper?
And not the black dot on top of it
Will I look at the imperfection of others?
Or look for their goodness even just a bit


I know that each has a mission
To achieve it, use the 20/20 vision
Coz, God wants that His creations
Fulfill their mission with satisfaction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 02 August 2011

Yes Malou, so true, the world is not perfect. God has given us all talents to help make things a bit better. If we use them for that purpose, peace of mind will be ours. Your rhymes are pleasant and your 20/20 vision contrasts nicely with the awe expressed.

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