Must Improve Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Must Improve

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Life may have no end
Till you change inner trend
Come out from long desires
And love for treasure

Life may include
Positive attitude
For doing needful
And turn successful

Yes young age is enterprising
With no more surprising
It contains courage and vigor
With lots of things at stake with honor

You can carry on
When time allows moving on
But when it turns against
It must maintain interest

In the end it must improve
With chances to prove
And stand victorious
And keep it continuous

Saturday, April 19, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 5 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

Shujat Ahmad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

nice Leenelle Atkinson12 minutes ago like it aot

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

Life may have no end Till you change inner trend

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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