*musky Vale Of Tunes* Poem by Dr subhendu kar

sizzling rain entices crowd by summer Yet fountain flows hurriedly by cascading blinking star intones from far off distance Moon still elicits love by coolness in heart night slowly paints the art of love let joy and sorrow walk hand in hand joy and fear trudge path being far away friends binds together in their own ways are we not same as we are as we were and eve? life is a seamless stream along glow eternal wow shub you have the entire nature in your poem the sizzling rain, the cascading fountains the seamless stream, the cool moon, the blinking stars wonder imagery---a tenner from me anjali

rich and strong words... great concepts..intelligible thoughts ..makes into an excellent piece.. this is a superb write...as always thoughts and words like this...it must be from YOU... thanks for sharing... 10++++ _maia_

Interesting pairing of sentiments.

There are some poetic gems glinting from this fascinating poem about the paradox of opposites. I have chosen a couple which particularly appealed to me: 'night slowly paints the art of love' 'time flows in its lofty veil of tunes betiding'. Your poetic tunes are very haunting, Subhendu. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

poem is a wonderful pastel fulfill with epithets and impersonation, the idea being that the earth behaves like a living being, great poem10++

'joy and fear trudge path being far away friends binds together in their ownways are we not same as we are as as we were and eve? life is a seamless stream along glow eternal

'night slowly paints the art of love let joy and sorrow walk hand in hand' Isn't it always? why oh why? so true... a well done poem. thanks for the comments.

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

joy and fear trudge path being far away - be brave to walk, don't fear the path is the path of life no ones knows where it ends, .......life is a seamless stream along glow eternal......... friends binds together in their own ways - friends are friends whose mind you cannot read as today they are sweet and tomorrow they become bitter...........very meaningful poem with taste of reality 10 x 10x 10x 10....... congratulation poet

are we not same as we are as we were and eve? life is a seamless stream along glow eternal .................................................................. Subhendu, It that forces us to think about the god... Very strong poem, good luck - in all and everywhere.. 10x10.. Tsira