Musings(Haiku) Poem by Sathya Narayana

Musings(Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


roses know
they are beautiful
hence, keep thorn guards

rivers run
with whirling arrogance
till death in ocean

green apple, so sweet
betraying colour inferences
like a child prodigy

six pack muscles, half nude
...not a machoman walking on ramp
...fisherman at swamp

Wednesday, November 19, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: color,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annie Girl 19 November 2008

awsome excellent keeping it real and true nice work

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Indira Babbellapati 19 November 2008

i always like pithy expressions...joy to read!

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Fay Slimm 23 December 2008

Love your openings in this peice Sathya - - the imagery used is excellent - and it opns up to the main body of the poem which has it's own surprise ending too.... very well put together........ from Fay a 10

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Tarun Sharma 30 November 2008

amazed at the simplicity of the beautiful! rgds

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Ammmmmazing! Used allegories are multi-faced Rose oh rose! 10++

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 November 2008

HEY BFULLY ARRANGED STRING OF HAIKUS..

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Reshma Ramesh 22 November 2008

superb observation...especially the last lines...........good write

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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