' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' 'Music Heard Faintly On The Edge Of Sound Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' 'Music Heard Faintly On The Edge Of Sound

Rating: 2.7


The air looked
startled by the thunder

lightning ripped
the sky apart

easy as paper.

Later the evening
wore an ugly bruise

as if Heaven
had been badly beaten up

& left for dead.

The horizon remained
tight lipped

even the crows
refused to caw.

The trees said nothing.

The man
nursed his pain

like a drunk
over a slow gin

retracing his footsteps
to the car

sat inside
as darkness fell

& cried
softly to himself.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 27 January 2010

Captures the plight of the drunk well

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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