...Murder... Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

...Murder...

Rating: 4.4


Scene playing in my Head
Every time Anger gets overfed

Screams inside making their way
To the outside…
where they Attack your face, and starts to play

And Hands…Stretching; Reaching your throat
To Grab it tight.
And Stop the Pain your words have brought

To hold the Air from going in…
The heart that you pretend…
Knows the Virtue…knows the Sin

Million times this Scene play
Where Sanity have no place to stay

Cause with Anger and Sadness
Happiness…Is murdered…
And the Mind…dancing in madness.


Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reetessh Sabrr 04 April 2009

good write sarah

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 April 2009

A murder within heart and mind.....No dagger, no blood. Anger kills many other feelings but sadness is always creative. Good write, Sarah. Best Wishes Naseer

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Roland Bastien 21 July 2009

You capture in an accurate and expressive technic the insight of our human nature -

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 June 2009

clean and significant...........10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

'Cause with Anger and Sadness Happiness…Is murdered… And the Mind…dancing in madness.' Nicely presented,10++

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Kesav Easwaran 01 May 2009

sensitive write, Sarah...you use a strong and attractive vocab nicely to express your thoughts...good piece...thanks...10

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Akram Awadat 22 April 2009

touching poem, well done thanks for sharing sarah

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