Murder Poem by Ashley Young

Murder

Rating: 4.5


Murder courses through my vains
You put me through so much pain

And know i want you dead
A bullet in your head

I see your blood crimson and red
made me happy now that your dead

I murdered you, i planned it all out
I stabed you in the lung so you couldnt shout

And when i saw your vary last breath
I sighed in relife
who knew my pain would end in death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saint Cynosure 04 July 2008

So he should have you 10... I will.

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Greenwolfe 1962 18 June 2008

This last line is one of the most profound lines in the language. Who knew, indeed? Who knows? Does it? On the answer to that question, lies the destiny of mankind. That line, is worth 8, all by itself. GW62

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