~ Ms. Niv Waiting ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Wow! ! Oozing romance from effervescent waiting dame. Solid ten++ [not effervescent LOL! ] dr.sakti

Liquid diamond love // Dropping out, // Bunking out, Excellent expression…we’re waiting for you next poem… Escaping out effortlessly from my heart with jested ten++

Ambience and imagery are very romantic. Beau how he can stay without saying ‘yes’ to the call [Waiting] Ten++

Excellent love poem of Dame [Ms. Nivedita]… it is waiting where bunking out of love…diamond… time being assassinated by watch...wow! ! Ten

lovely romantic piece well done there for real well penned poem luwi

Hopefully embraces by a mellifluent universe waiting still as well :)

This piece cojures pictures of a beach boy.

The images and diction are quite alluring and can be- in my opinion-analyzed on a couple levels: the power of the beauty of the female and the beauty of nature 'waiting' for sun set to sun and rise and all life form in their majestic beauty! Ms Niv, captured both level of her poem with, striking images, and description that blows one mind. Thanks for such a beautiful poem! A! 0+++-i hope the my register.

Carmine folded in shades of baby pinks... and subtleties... shroud the turmoil...deep within... for nature will always have its way...we will pick up the debris too well written...balanced and structured cheers and ten

hi Niv, A poem of good metaphor, the mood of yours has been straight way projected in the nature and its art. 'Liquid Diamond Love' - a good phrase well set here. So many other beautiful lines are there to give your poem a great height. Keep it up. Ten + Keep it up. Gautam