*****ms Lonely........... Poem by vamsi krishna

*****ms Lonely...........

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as i sat and sipped my cup of coffee
i saw an lady sitting and doing the same

grazing out of the window and thinking
about someone or abut no one
about her love or her husband
or just about life or about some wonders

she was intense but buetiful
calm but loud
and i dont know what
as the world went by
no movment came by

it was a wonderful day
but her buety mesmerised me
the day as so went by
her thoughts came returning by

alas i dont know why
but she kept distubing me
as time went on
i could never forget her
as her buety i remembred
but about her sadness i wondered

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 03 June 2009

a very detailed picture on a lonely and beautifull lady.how nice. posted 10 love surya

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Justin Unanue 03 June 2009

A melancholy poem. Try to work on your spelling/grammar, I know it's hard!

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 04 June 2009

hey...! ! ..this is gud.....but i think u shud double check ur spellings.....just a simple thing.... :)

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a cute image! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mona Martinez 08 June 2009

wow i enjoyed that. very visual.

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

her sorrowing beauty could be the reason for your attraction...impressive write

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C. P. Sharma 04 June 2009

Good poem but needs a little bit of editing. CP

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Priyanka Bhowmick 04 June 2009

wonderful one...yes it does happen sometime when u see some unknown one. u do not know abt him/ her... completly a stranger to u.. but still his/ her thoughts keep on disturbing u.. very gud write. above 10.

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