...Mr. Cigarette Poem by Eyan Desir

...Mr. Cigarette

Rating: 5.0


Wrapped in a cylinder
Tobacco's nicotine
Mixed with many flavors
Around soft paper

Watch a cigarette
See a cancer stick
Sentences to slowly
Split innocent lives

Buy a cigarette
An apostle of dead
With germs of Satan!
Working to make you rest

Ignite a cigarette
Taste additive pleasure
A drying's man liquor

Inhale a cigarette
Smell the perfume of dead
Slowing kissing your chest

Learn about cigarettes
Know he's not a friend!

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Pulished work of E.D
14th May 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bengt O Björklund 26 May 2009

I guess it is ok, to long to fit on package though.

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James Mclain 26 May 2009

it is death as i puff myself into the smooth tobacco leaf eternal embrace..im not Yul Brenner but cigarette smoking will kills ya...iip

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 May 2009

I am not a smoker but I can admire your Mr. Cigarette. Should be displaced everywhere. Smokeless 10 for this anti-smoking piece of write. Best Wishes Naseer

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Kale Beaudry 27 May 2009

Ah, one of the many things in this world that will kill you, but people do it anyways. I'm not sure if you meant 'addictive' where you spelt 'additive? ' Pretty straightforward, but undoubtedly true; the kiss of death from a cigarettes breath.

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Fay Slimm 27 May 2009

Very sound reasons for stopping the smoking habit - - 10 from Fay

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Ron Flowers 14 June 2009

You said it very well, Eyan. A 10 from me. Ron

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this is really good for us young people because everybody i see thats around my age thats all they do and im like yall die early if yall don't stop..

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~Crystal Midnight~ 07 June 2009

Watch a cigarette See a cancer stick this is really good for kids... I always tell my parents when they smoke they are going to get cancer. cigarettes are so gross. I am glad you wrote this. good job. ~CM~

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Lady Grace 04 June 2009

good write, keep writing..grace

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Rosalita Fernandez 04 June 2009

oh...chilling...i smoke but hate that i smoke but this is chilling, good poem i like it

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