Moving Stones Poem by Santosh Sharma

Moving Stones

Rating: 5.0


Smiling faces, hearts are numb
kindness in words as parrots are trained
Love is exhibited , mind is reasoning for gain
Sympathy in demand, goals are well defined
Designed wisest of creation, to beautify the land
All are racing, purpose unknown
The day is not far of, You may wonder
where is my created men
One day will see, only stones and
stones are moving around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 27 June 2011

Packed of thought...the thought you taught is great reminder for others..it touched by sharp idea and well what more to say, you did very well poem :) cheers! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Romeo Della Valle 27 June 2011

The clear observation of mankind little by little destroying this once beautiful earth. Everyday we are tampering with the atmosphere and contaminating the air and water with great indifference and without regard for our survival! Excellent and well penned write! 10+++ Thank for sharing, Love and Peace for always...

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Soma Mukherjee 27 June 2011

Ah the abused earth, its a pity we become deaf and blind as per our needs moaning rivers, drooping shoulders of mountains cry mercy and we chose to ignore...beautiful poem, thanks for sharing

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K J 29 June 2011

Eco-friendliness message comes clean in this poem. Appreciate your noble effort.Please spread this message around or your future generations will have only moving stones..

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Hans Vr 01 July 2011

'Smiling faces, hearts are numb' immmediately made me think of some experiences in fancy hotels. It is so easy to tell a forced from a true smile. The kindness for money, also so recognisable. Somehow, Santosh, I think that the people practising these falsehoods are on the losing end. I really believe a increasing number of people want to be kind and smile, just because of the peace of mind brings along. I think that sooner rather than later the number people doing that willl reach a critical level and that will change the world forever. This may be overly optiimistic, but if it turns out to be true, poets like you will be able to look back with lots of satisfaction since you will have given a major contribution to a better world. Congrats with this fantastic poem.

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Surender Kumar 26 September 2018

Very nice and thought provoking, but misery is we read it, praise it and forget it. But keep doing the great job to save the humanity...

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 07 July 2011

Good poem, i like the way you express this poem in a so truly way. Kinda enjoy reading this.

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Nice poem keep it up.......

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 04 July 2011

Poetic effect of the poem is self evident. Pessimistic approach has ever allured poets all over the world.With the passage of time humanity seems to be becoming stony.

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Robert Melliard 03 July 2011

I like the attack on on hypocrisy in the first part of the poem, but I'm not sure if I understand the end.

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