Moving On As With The Breeze (Goodbye Song) Poem by Jenn Kovel

Moving On As With The Breeze (Goodbye Song)

Rating: 5.0


I base truths on
Candle lights and
Flicker flames with
Shadow sight,
Nothing is not as it seems and
We were someone
And somewhere to be found

Yet you were nowhere to be found

Dust settles, graceful
Finds its blue depth grave in
Unchartered waters as
One more look connects two sets of
Hungry eyes

One last stolen moment, keep it locked away and sigh

The westward wind
Whispers out this flickering
Flame with ease
We break glance to watch two
Silver wisps of smoke curl and
Twist their
Goodbye song

And I, I find myself carried along

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Mendros 19 August 2007

Great metaphor. Not sure i've ever heard 'have a nice life' expressed as musically, without music.

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