Moving Poem by Deepti Ghosh

Moving

Rating: 4.8


Don't let that untouched tea cup
Fool you.
Notice those footprints?
Fossils of a time long gone…
The cobwebs of unlived neatness second that.
And those mails-
Are they oozing out of the door
Or trying to force their way in?
The windows, with dark circles underneath
Reek of emptiness inside.
The barren walls practice being strangers-
Their fidelities divided
between the middlemen and me.
I am neatly packed
in parts
in those boxes I forgot to label.
The movers are here.
No one lives here now.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anandabrata Ghosh 27 September 2013

Beautiful as always...and moving

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Aditya Trivedi 27 September 2013

Moving and it is all but a memory..

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 September 2013

A pithy poem.I like it much

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Khairul Ahsan 15 September 2013

A little elaboration please.

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Aman Arora 14 September 2013

That's a mysterious piece.

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