Mountain Poem by ramesh rai

Mountain

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High so, touching the sky
clouds playing in lap
with enormous electricity
like a hump with reeds
hidding treasure and panacea
autumn makes a recluse
wearing garlands of fire
rich in nature, poor in sight
spring ladens with flower and fruits, vegges with green leaves
like a medicant
rampant snow attire the Priest
blessing for love and peace
all around
gale takes turn
fountain of spring
sprouted from heart
cultivates the field
quench thirst of animate
mountainous nature allure the world
be like mountain
held your head like

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 23 July 2013

the special thing about this poem is the composition of phrases and manipulation of images...a great symbol for a high head in many situations of human life!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 July 2013

salute to mountains, from where the soil itself has come to be.

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Poetheart Morgan 24 July 2013

there in the heights the wind will blow my ashes I will rest where i always lived.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 July 2013

Be like mountain. Beautiful. Thank you.

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R.j. Wynn 24 July 2013

Yes sir. A mountain of a man. Who is he.

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Dave Walker 24 July 2013

A great poem, the mountains can tell us all about nature.

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Walterrean Salley 24 July 2013

Very interesting and informative. New insight concerning an object one might have known little or nothing of. Thank you.

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