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Flutter, flutter
on the window,
letters will arrive so soon,
Bringing news
of loved Berliners .........
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich (10/15/2005 7:17:00 PM)
Yes, Lamont you are right. It was actually a bit of emotion misdirected at you.
I try to either keep a civil tongue or hold it altogether.
Best
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (10/15/2005 9:35:00 AM)
very ethereal...I like the symbolism. |
Raynette Eitel (10/15/2005 9:35:00 AM)
I like this poem a lot, Herbert, but in the second stanza, last line, I would leave off the word 'was..' The meter would be better there, I think.
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