** Mother To Be ** Poem by Mehraneh Hosseini

** Mother To Be **

Rating: 5.0


They say you will go to heaven
If you have a bun in the oven
After passing one and seven
You would pass one month again
It's beyond all men's ken

Teetering on the brink
Not allowed to drink
Hardly sleeping a wink
Trying to be in the pink
If not, fall down and sink

Least said soonest mended
All things you have ever said
About how much you suffered
At first sight disappeared
The best thing since sliced bread
Promoting over everybody's head

That's why we have always heard
Being a mother is the best thing you have ever felt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 18 February 2012

'tis a wonderful poem/so fresh and elegant...10

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Serena Taylor 18 February 2012

Really nice! reminds me of the time when my mum was going to have my little sister: D lol

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2012

That's why we have always heard Being a mother is the best thing you have ever felt... to be mother is nothing like others.. feel divine and no one can undermine.. i loved it....10 welcome

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Cg Shankar 19 February 2012

Being a mother is the best thing you have ever felt. This idea has been supported well in a nice verse with fine rhygmn. Mother is really a symbol of sacrifice!

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 February 2012

flow, wording and rhyme is beautiful.nice poem.liked it.

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Saadat Tahir 01 August 2012

nice tender poem about a mother to be well written and exudes the confidence of creation.... blessings sat

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Dwi Utami 21 July 2012

very good poem...i sure every mother go to heaven.

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Nader Baheri 13 July 2012

this is really the best of your poems.very nice one in a good rhyme.thank you for this great poem.

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Mohammadreza Elkaei 14 June 2012

I'm speechless Mehraneh.Great job!

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Amir Forougi 05 May 2012

Sense of maternity and motherhood with high pulse of kindness especially in our country with good background culture

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