**mother** Poem by Amanda Eckols

**mother**

Rating: 2.8


mother dear oh how i love you
more than you'll ever know
mother sweet protector
you have grown a gaaden of eden
for in your arms there is no evil
mother dear child of god
you taught me of the world
with ever growing patience
if all I ever where to say
just three word to you
I know just what would and wouldnt do
That vastness of these simple words
you taught me just what it means
'I LOVE YOU'

(Please tell me what you think. I really need help its for my mommy's B-day)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan O 10 November 2009

i think it is lovely Amanda..it's not really for others to tell one what they think when it's something as personal as to one's mother...but i think from your heart if this is how you wish it said..it is beautiful...i will only say one thing...proof read well..or as i use get a spell checker program running to correct errors in words...i do it all the time it really does help.... ~^..^

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