Mosquitoes Complained Poem by Ray Lucero

Mosquitoes Complained

Rating: 5.0


One day a swarm of mosquitoes complained to God

“Lord God we must protest! ”

“What is it My Children? ”

“We want You to still the Wind”

“Why? ”

“Because the Wind scatters our swarm”

“Ah I See”…God summoned the Wind

Within moments Wind arrived

God Spoke, “Wind, the mosquitoes have brought suit”

Wind replied “Where are my accusers? ”

'Gone…lost within thee Wind'

So it is when Seekers dispute God’s Creation

ROTMS

(Inspired by the brilliance of Rumi)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 27 June 2014

Wow this poem is different in an amazing way.you just defied the boundaries of poetry, well done Ray

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Atsiylah Garfinkel 18 January 2008

Fantastic and witty! 10/10!

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