~ Mosaic Lingerie ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Mosaic Lingerie ~

Rating: 5.0


~ MOSAIC LINGERIE ~
Ms. NIVEDITA
13.11.09
UK

She telephoned
Got medical report
Cancer!

For extramarital
Beaut infatuation
Separated

Former hubby
Asked her
Meet him.

She came
Said he
Every wealth
I’m giving you.

She surprised
Why?

He said
For our…?
Finally stopped

Looked at him
Snuggled him
In eyeful of tears..

He was wreathing
Poem inside
Long long after
Very romantic!

She passionately
Kissed him
Huggingly balleted
Fingers all o’er
Cuddled nuzzled
Gently on bed.

Voluptuously played
All they used to.

Poetry of…
Reminiscence
Many many loves
Lulu embraces.

Inside emotion
Immixed in furtive
Passionate word-adieu
‘Mosaic Lingerie’

He said
Rear our son
I’ll die
I’ve cancer.

Owe awe struck
She was.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 20 November 2009

still between the busy mind and the hands.. and other stuff... what else did he say too you.. and then as you...iip

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This is poetic climax with paradigm shift it is my humble answer to question of Poet IIP as a reader. Any questioning and answering will distort poetic grace, beauty…what I understand abut poem Ten++

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Photode Photode 27 November 2009

'...Owe awe struck...' I'm too PO PO

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Mark Nwagwu 27 November 2009

Inside emotion Immixed in furtive Passionate word-adieu ‘Mosaic Lingerie’ indeed a mosaic, over the ages, so many emotions, each a thread, a colour, wraps the soul, delivered to heaven

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 02 December 2009

Its awe and utter gosh… Dr. V.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 June 2010

a lovely but sad story.

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Katang Chakravorty 06 January 2010

Inside emotion // Immixed in furtive // Passionate word-adieu // ‘Mosaic Lingerie’ Passionate and exuding romance who is spurned, dying…a rare phenomena indeed

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Bachha Chakravorty 05 January 2010

Poetic climax came at the end…. Owe and Awe stuck she was… Nice poem..

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Braja K Sarkar 31 December 2009

Only the inner thoughts of this poem made me impressed.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 December 2009

To Sr. Poet Paul, Thank you. Copy to Poet Paul

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