! ! ...Mosaic Poem by Seema Aarella
! ! ...Mosaic
Love like dew embellished some orchards
For some a snowy carpet it made
His currents of love rushed seawards
On my palms like rain drops it played
The wordless concealed it in heart
But some created expressive verse
He scripted his love in mastered art
I scribbled mine with inept rehearse
Some reckon its beauty to full moon
A timeless spring for budding desire
Others deem it to blazing sun of noon
That scorched their flowering empire
What eyes observe of love is deception
Heart yearns for fidelity unrevealed
Gaudy exteriors of untrue affection
Concedes to the ardour concealed.
(Inspired by Syed Kamran.H.Bukhari's poem 'There is no love'...)
Kamran's piece already read...good inspiration you received from Kamran's, Seema...your poem qualifies well your insight into the poem you read...a good composition here...10
very apt title, right for the subject, you have handled skillfully with lovely imagery interwoven... read Kamran's poem also, you have added your owm insight.10 Mamta
a very beautiful write seema ji with very unique style and powerful imagery...i loved it and its added to my fav's...10++++ and A+++ rgds asif
There is a Cauveri - Ganga of verses seem to flow from your mind...it just runs pristine and juicy sweet...and this one is of the same...well done...keep going
This is the mosaic of love..stiched, patches by patches.You color them! ! ! Good writes my dear Seema!
wow! wonderful. 'The wordless concealed it in heart But some created expressive verse' lovely maam. thank you very much.
The efficience is at its peak.10 some suggesions given private.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 1:13:38 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Mosaic of love written so warm and sweet...Great poem...10+++