Mortal Beauty Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury
Mortal Beauty
Her hair glittered and shone
like glinting strands of gold
or her hair jet black
in a dark sheen of ebony
Ah witness the Creator's creativity
in beauty variety
Her eyes a shade
of sparkling jade
Or her gold brown eyes
in all the hues of sunrise.
Her cheeks had a blush
of the red of rubies
Her arms shimmered
as does diamond dust
Her skin was radiant
as mother'o'pearl
Her neck and figure
so sinuous and slender
as the diamond back snake.
The coy quiver of her lips
like blossoming tulips
Her nails one could fancy
were pink sapphire
Ah she could be a man's desire
set his heart on fire
But miss terrific might be waiting for heart throbs
and not just any Tom Dick or Bobs
So even if you may be a lady killer
meet your match
for she's a femmefatale!
The paragon of a beauty described in all her feminine charms! Many young men must be vieing with each other to find a place in her heart! The poem has sucked in all her symmetry and grace! Excellent!
beautiful expression.....lovely write... a great read indeed...
This depiction of feminine allure was lovely to read and brought a smile to my face, it could easily describe any girl who possesses the allure to drive a man (or women) insane with a desire to possess it for themselves, I like the way it was written and the flow. Good job
beautiful imagery on a mortal beauty but the real beauty comes from within. lovely write
a beautiful poem in tribute to beauty waiting for heart throbs not for passing passions. I enjoyed it.
Beautiful harmonious wording followed by wry humour a most fabulous mix. Bravo
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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:) femm fatale.... lovely write huh...no poet's notes there!