Morning White Horse Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Morning White Horse

Rating: 5.0


If then there were moonless long nights...
And the silent horseman went, like same...
If then the horse, too, was more blackish
As homeless thoughts over sad- knight...

What the smallest birdie could do of a garden
She sang in the afternoon and night by ear her thin.
So, did light for a sympathetic the fan of red rose,
Look, morning has caught up, them, with white horse...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 06 August 2009

Fascinating imagery Tsira...profound one! ! ! the white horse of morning glow through the face! ! !

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Fiona Davidson 09 August 2009

Vivid and strong write Tsira...jumps off the page to my mind...Fi 10++++

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Alison Cassidy 10 August 2009

Mythology and mystery pervade this fascinating poem about power of the small. White horses, red roses and little birdies - such a graceful combination. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Andrew Blakemore 11 August 2009

Lovely images created by you here Tsira, well done. Best wishes, Andrew

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Roland Bastien 13 August 2009

As homeless thoughts over sad- knight... ------------ I like the sound of it and the image too....

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Bert Bell 29 October 2010

Ah, Tsira, such a lovely and tender poem, rich in texture and imagery. Very sweet and well done.10++++

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Loved the imagination of this poem, Poetic language flowed beautifully! ; D

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Eyan Desir 03 January 2010

nice poetically write..........10

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Afzal Shauq 09 November 2009

What the smallest birdie could do of a garden She sang in the afternoon and night by ear her thin. So, did light for a sympathetic the fan of red rose, Look, morning has caught up, them, with white horse.. perfect way of writing and professionally expressed with symbolic way... really great work is this one.. sweet, rich and meaningful...liked it 10/10

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Obinna Eruchie 06 September 2009

Inspiring images you have penned in that lovely verse.

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