Morning Walk Poem by Hira Akhtar

A sweeeett poem, keep writing little poetess: -) Best of luck Bright Morn

A sweeeett poem, keep writing little poetess: -) Best of luck Bright Morn

Your poem is a vivid description of your experience in a beautiful morn, a nice visual poem.

you did a fine job 'capturing the scenes of nature in these lines'! the rhyming is perhaps better than when i read it three years ago. to MyPoemList. i hope your studies and life in general are going well. i don't remember if you had the entrance exam for medical school. i'm thinking you did and that you succeeded. any updates? bri :)

A beautiful and simple description of early morning and nice poem in a language that can easily be understood by the readers.

This is a well rhymed poem that describes the beauty of nature as seen during the course of a morning walk. You need a poet's eye to see things you described. Well done!

thanks sir for suggesting......i am very thankful yes sir buck is referring to a horse's movememnt and i changed the use of bark...Can you please tell me how is this now? thanks once again

very nice. i like the rhyming. i have two questions about word meanings. is buck referring to a horse's movement? and is touch of a bark referring to the feel of the outer surface of a tree? you used bark for something else also. i think it would have been better to just use it once in the poem, or at least to not have bark at the ends of two lines. maybe you could have put one bark inside a line. thanks for sharing. this is, i think, the poem i like best so far of the ones you have submitted. bri