Morning Song Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Morning Song

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to Ms. Alison Balsom, a gifted trumpeter)

iridescence
juxtaposing
sensations
emotions

pure
natural
vivacity
extraordinary

vision
love story
luminosity
flamboyant

unique temperature
like paradise
exotic plants
a haven for species

feeling of well being
captivating the essence
the existing sky and sun
precious serenity of sea

have you wandered
through these
lush place
an Eden on earth?

(inspired by Claude Monet's Morning at Antibes)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 18 January 2009

Nice ending. I like it when you match your impressions with some images (exotic plants/ a haven for species; and, existing sky and sun /precious serenity of sea) .

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 09 January 2009

Good work keep it up!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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