! ! More Thoughts Poem by Bob Blackwell

! ! More Thoughts

Rating: 3.1


As I reflect on what has gone before,
I consider, hopes and dreams
both past and present, some dreams
fulfilled, others broken, elapsed,
discarded from field of my imaginings.

I remember happy times, when laughter
poured out of happy smiling faces, fun times
blissful times of happiness, that had no care.
As tears fell down, I feel the dampness of
those dark moments of anguish on my face.

I mull over how fears I overcame of anxieties,
made me harden my resolve not to give into
hidden fears, to ignore them all the time. For
fears, worries, qualms and reservations all live
in future, and future is a time that never comes.

I recall the help, the good deeds I have given,
and recollect those times when I have erred.
As I journey ever onward through the mindscape
of my life, with its many ups and downs, I ponder
how the renewal of the spirit that made me happy,

was found through realising that we have to go,
through both shaded and sunny periods, effort is
needed, before we climb a mountain and descend
to life’s basin. What worth is life without hardship,
the reward of knowledge gained without some trial.


18-08-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 18 August 2009

Experience in life is a great teacher! You have learnt much from him it seems! Nice poem!

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Mamta Agarwal 18 August 2009

that's life- there are rhythms in life. wise put up no resitance and just go with the flow. life is not just growing old, its about growing up. Bob you have learnt your lessons well. it reflects in every poem you write. i feel inspired with your serenity. Mamta

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Raj Nandy 19 August 2009

BOB Sir, The principle of aerodynamics state that an Aeroplane takes to the air and climbs up high moving forward against the resisting air with its thurst! And so do we, with will force, determination and faith! Your last lines speak the eternal truth! 10+ - Raj

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Sandra Fowler 19 August 2009

Thank you for taking me on a journey through the mindscape of your life. It is well worth the read.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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C. P. Sharma 19 August 2009

Bob, As always you the the poetic heights in contrasting life's shades, the monotony fades. CP

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T McH 27 October 2009

Wonderfully, engagingly contemplative. Your last sentence abounds with a wisdom I acquired only recently. Thank you. t x

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Sonya Florentino 09 September 2009

i am touched and inspired reading this piece...thank you for sharing your thoughts....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 August 2009

powerful and reflective documentation! tremendous indeed! 10+

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Siddharth Singh 27 August 2009

Sparing a thought for the past and not thinking too much about the future, dwelling deep into the intricasies of like, an enchanting piece. Voted 10.

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Ritty Patnaik 24 August 2009

dear bob.....tremendous write! they are wise as well as inspiring. if one wants to get positive vibes, he should read this poem, which i call a anti depressant! god bless you for writing such good poetry. best wishes, ...ritty

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