Lora Colon

Silver Star - 3,397 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

Moonstruck - Poem by Lora Colon

I was talking to the moon
Just the other night,
Telling him how much
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Comments about Moonstruck by Lora Colon

  • Bronze Star - 2,506 Points Clarence Prince (5/17/2015 3:23:00 PM)

    A real a one about the moon and loneliness!
    Well done, Lora!
    Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,279 Points Stephen Katona (5/15/2015 1:07:00 PM)

    A delight to read. What a terrific idea. I'll never look at the moon in the same way again. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,686 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (4/16/2015 4:18:00 PM)

    I love this poem..it is an absolute gem... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,908 Points Kim Barney (3/3/2015 1:48:00 PM)

    This poem is a gem. I really enjoyed this one. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,307 Points Darlene Walsh (12/16/2014 5:47:00 PM)

    Just as beautiful as the first time I read it. :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,307 Points Darlene Walsh (9/25/2014 6:36:00 PM)

    A beautiful, lovely, sad and very well written poem. I will be back to read this again and again. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 764 Points Birgitta Abimbola Heikka (5/11/2014 12:47:00 PM)

    Well-written piece “Moonstruck.” (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,054 Points Michelle Claus (5/9/2014 2:36:00 PM)

    Such a sweet and universally accessible poem. It could easily be adapted to children's poetry, by modifying the term *lovers*. Many children and teenagers could find meaning in and connection with the theme of loneliness. Who among us - young and old - hasn't found companionship with our satellite, the Moon? Even in our darkest hours, we can always gaze at the moon. Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,547 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (5/9/2014 5:05:00 AM)

    Good morning Lora. I loved your poem, well written and meaningful. Loyd C Taylor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 41 Points Surajit Banerjee (5/9/2014 2:04:00 AM)

    This is a very sweet romantic poem. I love reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Kasey Jessie (5/8/2014 10:30:00 PM)

    I love this poem it is so beautiful. I wish I could come up with something as beautiful as that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reita Stephens (5/8/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. So much to do with moon. Thank you for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Charlotte Gunther (5/8/2014 5:37:00 PM)

    i like this - its lighthearted approach to loneliness. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,964 Points Savita Tyagi (5/8/2014 4:19:00 PM)

    Such a lovely poem. Love the feelings expressed here. Amazing read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Molly O'shaunessy (5/8/2014 3:00:00 PM)

    That is a wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (5/8/2014 1:48:00 AM)

    an amazing write worthy to be the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (5/8/2014 1:32:00 AM)

    A perfect way of using nature to describe the inner thought. Good the poet has solace in nature as a companion, great match and good job. I really like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points John Brown (10/14/2013 6:58:00 AM)

    A neat little poem, which I enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (5/8/2013 12:40:00 PM)

    Loneliness chides the moon
    on empty nights in twilights gloom.
    Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Norman Ayres (5/8/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    very nice poem, reading these kind of poems makes me feel sad and lonely, but its so much better than feeling nothing at all. (Report) Reply










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